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She was almost seventeen when she realized she used to be another person. The rain had been falling in relentless sheets when the realization struck her with the force of a runaway carriage. She stopped dead on the muddy path between Netherfield and Longbourn, her worn leather boots sinking into the mire as cold water seeped through her stockings.
Sure, things did sound familiar from time to time during her childhood. Like her family name or the one of her four sisters. She did sometimes have thought of strange concepts or played melodies which seemed to come out of nowhere. She thinks she remembers… The smell of coffee brewing in an automatic machine. The weight of a smartphone in her palm. The particular way sunlight reflected off glass skyscrapers. Then whole scenes : binge-watching period dramas under a weighted blanket, rolling her eyes at yet another adaptation where Lizzie Bennet was somehow even more conventionally attractive than in the book. Debating feminist theory in university seminars where nobody questioned her right to be there.
Her hands trembled as she gripped the handle of her pathetically small umbrella. She could suddenly remember fragments of another life. A life with antibiotics and voting rights and takeaway sushi. A life where she'd ironically worn replica Regency gowns to Comic-Con, never imagining she'd wake up trapped in the real thing. The worst part? She knew exactly which tropes she was living through. Some cosmic joke had plucked a 21st-century woman who used to love historical romance and dumped her into the body of the plainest Bennet sister. The irony burned worse than the rainwater trickling down her neck.
By the time she stumbled into Longbourn's entrance hall, her dress clung to her like a second skin. Lydia's shrill laughter echoed from the drawing room, punctuated by Kitty's giggling. No one came to check why the third sister stood dripping on the tiles. From the library, no dry observation emerged. From her mother's sitting room, no exclamation about catching her death. Just the housemaid eyeing the puddle forming at Mary's feet with resigned annoyance. She might as well have been a ghost already.
Upstairs in her sparse bedroom, peeling off layers of soaked muslin, Mary pressed her forehead against the freezing windowpane. She could remember the most important facts of Pride and Prejudice. Yet, none of that helped when she was actually here - trapped in a world where her sharpest observations would be dismissed as "unseemly bluestocking tendencies."
The candle guttered as she examined her reflection. It was the same that she had this very morning. Yet, it suddenly felt like a stranger. The only good thing was the mind of The Woman From Before, telling her that the story and her family had been unfair to her. For she was not ugly. Plain compared to her sisters, maybe. But certainly not deserving the harsh comment on her appearance. Behind those blue eyes that she actually shared the color with Jane, lived a woman who'd once chosen spinsterhood proudly back when that didn't mean becoming a burdensome aunt dependent on family charity.
Rain lashed against the glass like a thousand tiny reprimands. Out in the real world - the one she felt was actually the real world - someone had probably noticed she was missing by now. Reported the empty apartment. Because, unlike here, she used to be love. The hysterical laugh that escaped her sounded suspiciously like a sob.
Because this wasn't some romantic isekai adventure. This was waking up, an intellectual trapped in a time before intellect granted any freedom. The independent woman reduced to praying for a husband just to avoid destitution. The walking joke of a character whose entire literary purpose was to highlight how undesirable bookishness and piousness made a woman. And the cruelest twist? She couldn't even completely change her fate. Not really. Any attempt to be The Woman would see her branded hysterical or mad. The freedoms she'd taken for granted - speaking her mind, choosing anything, pursuing knowledge - were privileges this era punished mercilessly in unmarried women.
Downstairs, a door slammed. Mrs. Bennet's voice rose in theatrical distress about her nerves. The mundane horror of it all settled over Mary like the damp chill in her bones. She suddenly understood why the original Mary Bennet, the one from before this morning, had hidden behind moral platitudes and Fordyce's sermons. Survival in this world required playing the role you'd been assigned. Even when you remembered there were other ways to live.
The sun rose and set in slow, indifferent arcs across the Hertfordshire countryside as time stretched onward in a blur of indistinguishable days. Mary Bennett—or rather, the being who had once been Mary Bennett—found herself suspended in a quiet purgatory of self-reckoning. The mirror reflected a face that was hers and yet not hers, the same angular cheekbones and sharp nose, but the eyes behind them carried the weight of decades Mary had never lived.
She had tried, in those first disorienting weeks, to reconcile the dissonance between who she was now and who she had been before the change. Mary Bennett—devout, pedantic, desperate for approval—was gone. Not vanished, exactly, but dissolved, like ink in water, leaving behind only faint traces of herself in the habits of her body. The Woman who had slipped into her skin was not wholly a stranger, though. They shared too much in temperament for that. Maybe it was why she was Mary and not inside the head of Jane or Lydia.
Neither of them had ever been skilled at the delicate dance of society. Mary had stumbled through it, quoting scripture like a shield, desperate to prove her worth. The Woman had simply… abstained. Silence was her refuge, not from fear, but from preference. Books were her companions, not trophies to be flaunted at dinner parties, but quiet escapes into worlds where she did not have to perform.
Mary ran her fingers over the spine of a volume in her father’s library—Plato this time, not Psalms—and wondered if anyone would notice. The old Mary would have never dared touch such secular works. The old Mary would have folded her hands and recited Proverbs at the supper table, hoping, fruitlessly, for a flicker of approval from her father’s distracted gaze.
But the new Mary—no, not new, just altered—no longer cared for such performances. She no longer ached for the absent praise that had once driven her to fill the silence with hollow wisdom.
She sat at the pianoforte, as she always had because both of them actually loved it, but played different music now. The stiff, pious hymns had given way to something softer, something melancholic and undemanding. Kitty had paused once in the doorway, brow furrowed, as if noticing something amiss but unable to pinpoint what. She was the only one.
It was strange, she mused, how grief could settle into the spaces left behind by a self no longer mourned. She grieved for Mary Bennett—the girl who had tried so hard, who had been so easily dismissed. Would anyone miss her? Would her mother weep for the daughter who had quoted scripture with such earnest devotion? Would Lizzie, with her sharp eyes and sharper tongue, glance at her one day and realize something fundamental had shifted? Would someone accuse her of being some sort of changeling ?
No.
No one had noticed.
It should surprise her, yet, it didn’t.
And that, perhaps, was the cruelest revelation of all.
The days continued their relentless march. Mary—the new Mary, the old Mary, the something-in-between—existed in the margins of Longbourn’s life, unchanged in the eyes of those who had never truly seen her to begin with.
It was, in its own quiet way, a tragedy.
The Woman had once found amusement in Mr. Bennet's sharp wit—that dry, sardonic humor that cut through pretension like a scalpel. In her younger days, she'd mistaken his cynicism for intelligence, his detachment for sophistication. Mary, ever earnest, had spent her childhood chasing the faintest scraps of paternal approval, that rare nod or half-smile that might—just might—signal she'd done something worthy of notice. But the not-Mary, the one who'd grown cynical beneath the surface, saw him clearly now: a man who treated his family's future like a joke he hadn't bothered to finish.
Finances were the most glaring proof. Any fool could see that £2000 a year was more than enough to secure comfort, even modest luxuries—had he bothered to set aside a fraction for his daughters' dowries. Instead, coins slipped through his fingers like water, diverted to books he barely read, wine he scarcely tasted, and the occasional extravagant gift tossed at Jane or Lizzie when the mood struck him. Mrs. Bennet's shrill panics over lace prices and butcher's bills were met with eye rolls, as if her desperation was another tedious parlour game. Did he truly believe pin money stretched far enough to clothe five daughters and maintain appearances? Or did he simply not care?
The mismanagement went beyond money—it was negligence dressed in lace cuffs. A father's duty wasn't just to chuckle at his wife's hysterics or indulge his favorites (Lizzie with her quick tongue, Jane with her serene beauty). It was to ensure his children wouldn't starve the moment he stopped breathing. Not-Mary's jaw clenched whenever she imagined him shrugging over the entailment: "Collins will handle it," as if the man who preached sermons on charity would house five penniless women out of kindness. Worse still were the moments he'd smirk at Kitty's silliness or Lydia's brashness—as though their lack of sense wasn't cultivated by his own indifference. Teach them nothing, mock their ignorance, then wash his hands of the consequences? That wasn't wit. That was cowardice. He had built himself a prison of his own making, then congratulated himself on the view from the window.
Two possibilities coiled in her mind, both equally damning. Either he was too shortsighted to recognize the cliff's edge they danced upon—in which case his mockery of others' foolishness was hypocrisy of the highest order—or he saw the precipice perfectly well and simply couldn't be troubled to steer them clear. A man who loved his daughters would have fought the entailment, invested in annuities, or at least taught them skills beyond piano and embroidery. Instead, he'd built a library to retreat into, leaving them defenseless.
Lizzie could keep his laughter, his clever asides, his conspiratorial glances. Not-Mary was done waiting for a man who doled out approval like spare coins—rare, arbitrary, and never enough to matter. Let the favorite daughter learn what that approval was worth when the story really began !
Anyway, not-Mary knew she couldn’t trust her family with her future. Still, she didn’t have a lot of options. Marriage or the precarious life of a governess—eternally hovering between servant and family, never truly belonging to either. Beneath her stays, the coins sewn into her shift pressed against her ribs—three months' worth of pin money carefully hoarded, slipped past Lydia's prying eyes whenever their father remembered to distribute their allowances. Enough perhaps for passage to London if she dared, but then what? The Woman knew the streets would swallow a solitary female whole within a week.
When Uncle Gardiner's visiting card appeared on the silver tray two Thursdays hence, her pulse leapt. He was different from the others—his cuffs perpetually ink-stained from ledgers rather than hunting dogs, his conversation peppered with talk of steam engines and joint-stock companies rather than sermons and shotgun loads. During their walk to Meryton (ostensibly to admire the new millinery but really to escape Aunt Phillips' interminable gossip), she let the words tumble out between breaths: "They say the Manchester line will halve the travel time to Liverpool..." His eyebrows rose slightly—not at the subject matter, but at her uncharacteristic intervention. Seizing the moment, she described (in carefully measured terms) how canal shares had transformed the Duke of Bridgewater's fortunes, how the price of Lancashire cotton might rise if American exports faltered. The seed took root; she saw it in the thoughtful tilt of his head.
That night, she pried up the loose floorboard. The hidden cache held more than coins— beneath it, the pamphlet on railway investments she'd copied out word-for-word from one of the newspapers of Father when no one was looking.
Uncle Gardiner's reaction surprised her. Where she expected paternal dismissal, she received a banker's keen assessment—questions about risk tolerances, timelines, collateral. His ink-stained finger tapped the table as he explained (without condescension) how even a modest sum might grow if placed in Stagecoach rather than South Sea ventures. The Woman supplied silent corrections—East India Company would rebound after the Opium troubles, but not for seven years yet—which she translated into demure suggestions. The numbers spun dizzying possibilities. Even at best return, it would take until she was nearly thirty to accumulate anything resembling independence. Still, thirty was preferable to forty, and forty to fifty, and any of them to something like Mrs. Collins' fate—trapped forever in Hunsford's stuffy parlour listening to sermons on wifely submission.
Beneath her pillow that night, the pamphlet's rough pages prickled her cheek as she considered darker options. The Woman's memories suggested writing—Austen's crisp social satires, the Brontës' wild moorland passions—but Mary Bennet knew the reality: printers who paid women half-rates, publishers demanding scandalous revisions, the inevitable moment when some acquaintance recognized Meryton's foibles in print. No, better the slow accretion of railway dividends than the gamble of literature.
At dawn, when the household still slept, she counted her hoard once more. Enough for fourteen shares in the Grand Junction Canal at current rates. Not freedom, not yet. But the beginning of a rope she might one day climb.
Mary Bennet had been helpless.
Not-Marry refused to be.
The slow turning of the seasons marked time's passage with silent inevitability, each day melting indistinguishably into the next within the quiet rhythms of Longbourn. To the casual observer—indeed, to nearly everyone in the household—nothing of consequence had altered in the Bennet family's daily existence. The same conversations echoed through the halls, the same routines played out with practiced ease, the same grievances aired and forgotten by teatime. Yet beneath this veneer of sameness, subtle shifts had taken root, unnoticed by all but the most attentive.
Mary Bennet's absence from the drawing room's moral lectures was met with quiet relief by her sisters. No longer did they endure her stilted recitations of scripture or the ponderous wisdom she parroted from books she scarcely understood. Their father, Mr. Bennet, observed this change with detached amusement, though he made no comment—a fact which suited Mary perfectly, as she had no desire to explain herself. Mrs. Bennet, too absorbed in her nerves and her ceaseless scheming for her daughters' marriages, failed to register the transformation at all.
Only the household staff, those ever-watchful custodians of domestic minutiae, detected the undercurrents of difference. Mrs. Hill, the longtime housekeeper, noted how the middle Bennet daughter now ventured outdoors with unusual frequency, returning with her hems dusted with pollen and grass stains, the soles of her shoes bearing traces of mud from paths less traveled. The evidence of these solitary excursions piled up in the corners of the house, requiring more thorough cleaning than before. Mrs. Hill said nothing, though she wondered at the girl's sudden restlessness.
Downstairs, the cook—a sharp-eyed woman of few words—observed darker shifts. The girl had always been quiet, but now she moved through the kitchens like a shadow, speaking only when necessary, her voice softer than ever. The cook watched as Mary, on rare evenings, slipped into the kitchen to experiment with foreign recipes, her fingers dusted with flour as she painstakingly recreated intricate French pastries from memory. Once, the cook caught the murmured words "I miss the chocolate," spoken to no one in particular. She pretended not to hear, though the confession lingered in her mind. It was unseemly, of course, for a young lady of gentle breeding to dirty her hands with such work—but the cook kept the secret, sensing something fragile beneath the girl's newfound stillness.
What none of them knew—what none of them could possibly have guessed—was that Mary Bennet was not unhappy. Far from it. The initial disorientation had faded, replaced by a quiet contentment that settled over her like a well-worn shawl. The life she led now was not the life The Woman had once known, with its rushing noise and ceaseless distractions, but it was infinitely preferable to the stifling existence Mary Bennet had endured before.
Under the cover of night, she raided her father's library with methodical precision, absorbing knowledge he would never think to share with her. Each morning, she walked the grounds with purpose, filling her lungs with air untainted by smoke or industry, ensuring her body remained strong and capable. And in the hours between, she surrendered herself to art in all its forms—no longer as a desperate bid for approval, but for the sheer joy of creation.
Where Mary had once played the pianoforte with rigid precision, praying for praise that never came, Not-Mary now let her fingers stumble and relearn, finding pleasure even in imperfection. Where Mary had sketched with frustrated exactness, erasing and restarting at the slightest flaw, Not-Mary allowed her lines to wander, embracing the whimsy of asymmetry. Embroidery, sewing, even the simple act of arranging flowers—all of it became hers to enjoy without expectation.
There was peace in this anonymity, in the understanding that those around her would never truly see her. Their indifference no longer wounded her; instead, it freed her from the burden of seeking their esteem. If they valued her so little, why should she trouble herself over their opinions? Without the pressure to perform, without the need to be perfect, she could simply be.
Another woman—one forged in the relentless pace of the 21st century—might have withered beneath the slow, unremarkable passage of days in rural England. But her Woman did not. Whatever strange alchemy had woven their lives together, whatever force had allowed them to choose one another—it had been the right decision.
And so Mary Bennet—or perhaps no longer Mary at all—continued her quiet revolution, unseen and unremarked upon, save for the dust she trailed in from the garden, and the occasional whisper of longing for flavors that did not yet exist.