I really enjoyed this! Adding Jessica in was a great idea, and I also immensely enjoyed how you wrote all of Frank's dialogue. Matt in London--he must have been terrified on a plane for the first time! Also, nice job on getting into Karen's head, this was so well-written. Keep it up!
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kashinoha Mon 28 Mar 2016 01:34AM UTC
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