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  1. CAMIR Fri 02 Aug 2024 08:52AM UTC

    Captain Jean-Luc Picard and Dr. Beverly Crusher from Star Trek in romantic embrace

    What a lovely character study for both Seven and Tom, both their voices shine through so perfectly and I love how you write Seven - disconnected and cool and still caring, paying attention, listening, being maybe a bit influenced by Tom's chaotic nature.
    I love the scenery you describe and Tom's attention to detail, which is par for the course and also that he might teach Seven one or two things.
    I loved the little hints in the radio station to other Trek episodes and the song they were settling on and just the overall vibes and atmosphere. A very cute and thoughtful addition to the Potluck,

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    1. Regionalpancake Fri 02 Aug 2024 03:00PM UTC

      'Character study' makes me feel very professional as a writer, so thank you! Thank you too for your lovely compliments AND for being the first person to mention the radio easter eggs :D

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