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  1. Midokhan on Chapter 1 Sun 20 Oct 2024 11:35AM UTC

    Im still amazed at how efficiently yet smoothly you include the worldbuilding in your stories, it’s amazing!
    It really shows that Dream never got to properly socialize before, he’s trying so hard but he’s still painfully awkward, poor him… tho Hob’s not much better, but that would be the bi panic x)
    Pretty smart of Dream, the tutoring idea (but I have a feeling Lucienne and Matthew weren’t fooled ><)
    I can’t wait to read the rest of the story ! <3

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    1. apocryphal on Chapter 1 Sun 20 Oct 2024 04:59PM UTC

      Aw, thank you! It's definitely not easy sometimes, to integrate all your worldbuilding, but I'm glad that I seem to have pulled it off here. :D

      LMAO poor Dream here. He has absolutely no clue how to interact with people but he's trying. When he's not biting Hob's head off. Crushes are confusing. He's very lucky that Hob rolls with the punches so well (and yes, also, that Hob's bi panic is periodically in full force).

      You know, I won't confirm that Dream is lying about needing help in chemistry just to get some time with Hob--but it'd be pretty smart of him, if he did.

      Thank you so, so much for reading, and for taking the time to comment! I'm so excited to be on another adventure with you guys, and I can't wait to share the rest of the fic! <3 <3 <3

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