Comment on Bound to Glorious Purpose

1. KaliYugaFan on Chapter 8 Wed 08 Jan 2025 03:55PM UTC

   

   The dreams are kind of boring. I understand their purpose from a narrative perspective, but I think it’s fair to say the readers would prefer that her training be done on the ship in the real world, and not through the dreams. I kinda skim through those sections, to be honest.

   It’s a good story, you definitely shouldn’t drop it, but you’d probably see an uptick in reader activity if things actually happened in the real world more.

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2. 1. Jumpin on Chapter 8 Tue 21 Jan 2025 05:28AM UTC

      

      thank you. The next chapter is going to lead into few chapters that focus on the real world. the intention for the dreams is to lead up to a confrontation between Loki and Vers(Carol), but it doesn't sound like that story thread is landing the way I intended. I'll look at focusing more on the real world in future chapters.

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