Hahaha I was writing my comment and my phone tab went crazy in the middle of it and I lost it 😃 🔫 but I'm so excited to be reading this, I subscribed before doing anything else!! Committed from the beginning.
I was saying how I don't like how the Zygerria arc was handled at all, Ahsoka should not have gone, and Anakin would not have acted the way he did in The Clone Wars, I refuse to believe it! He would have been pissed at Ahsoka being there and would have made everything in his power for her to be safe while they were there.
Also I'm going to fight Mundi and Mace 👹 just because Ahsoka is in the frontlines and there already are Togrutas her age in Zygerria does not absolutely mean she should be too!!! She's a kid!!! Fuck being a Jedi!!! She's a kid first!!! You should be protecting her!! Get an adult to volunteer or something!!!
And of course Obi-Wan agrees with Anakin, he has common sense and morals!!! I'm glad he insisted on thinking on another plan and is doing everything he cans to avoid Ahsoka going because absolutely no one will stow away, of course not
And I agree Anakin should not be going in this mission either!!! This Anakin hasn't had therapy!!!
Cody and Rex and the disaster dynamic duo!! That should work.
Sneaky background Codywan<3 Giggling at "Obi-Wan's... Soft spot" 😭
Ahsoka my beloved <3 My little ball of chaos.
I really wish she wasn't going 😫 but alas, there would be no story.
IS NOT THAT HE DOESN'T THINK YOU CAN'T HANDLE HARD MISSIONS, PLEASE.😫😫😫 Not the snapping at poor Obi-Wan.
Oh dear, if she really thinks Anakin is going to react the same way here to her still going to the Citadel she's got another thing coming 😬
"She'd just have to explain after the fact" She's cooked. RIP.
Of course the Force is condoning her actions 😮💨
OH NO THEY LEFT WITHOUT HER, THAT'S WORSE, AHSOKA PLEASE.
I'm so ready for the angst and see how this goes, what twists you're putting into this 🔥 I have faith 🙂↕️ as always take your time to cook your ideas, they will be well received when they are ready. Even if they come with extensions or detours (We are not looking at TTTB) See ya on the next one!! Thanks for writing!!!
Aaaaaaaeeeee I'm so happy ur here and excited for this too !!! :3
Literally the whole reason I wanted to write this is bc i watched this episode and was like "he wouldn't fucking say that" every time anakin did anything 😭 there is a comic book arc (u may remember since its the one i linked in tttb) that the show is based on where he acts waaaay more in character, but I decided to kinda take the middle ground between the two and play with the idea that A) he absolutely would not let Ahsoka come with them, but also, B) he does not have the capacity to explain that decision to Ahsoka in a calm and reasonable manner because the situation is so triggering for him and also C) Ahsoka is still very much a child and while she is very mature in some instances, one of her weaknesses is overestimating her skills and capabilities to the point of putting herself and others in danger. Obi-Wan tries to pick up the slack, but his focus is more on anakin than ahsoka in that moment and he perhaps misses some warning signs he should've seen. Which is how we got here!!! this anakin hasnt had therapy made me lol bc like yea exactly 😭
I'm so sorry Mace :(( i wrote this before I read shatterpoint so i was less of a mace stan/defender at this point lololol but unfortunately somebody with a higher position had to take the opposition and he was the best option 😭 perhaps we shall have some mace redemption later
sneaky background codywan always <333 this universe is fun because they very much have a different initial vibe from tttb and I'm excited to dig into it :3
Ahsoka makes such a crucially bad choice here it's not even funny 😭 and like is the force encouraging her or is she hearing what she wants to hear
I'm so excited for u to read this one!!! It's definitely one of the heaviest things i've written angst-wise, but the hurt/comfort is pretty equally up there to hopefully balance things out!!! also i appreciate u taking the time to rewrite your comment post website crash bc thats happened to me and sometimes i just have to give up 😂 thanks as always for ur thoughts and excited to see u next time!! <3
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