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On the off chance that anyone actually liked this story to begin with, I would like to apologize. This is a story that, if I’m honest, I’m not exactly proud of. While the concept was, and still is something I’d like to entertain the idea of, the writing here is, well. . . Not.
If you compare this story to one of my more recent ones, you’ll see that my writing here is actually pretty bad. Mistakes in grammar, paragraphs that drag on for far too long, and dialogue being given without a specification as to who’s speaking. And that’s just the superficial things on the surface.
add to that the fact that this story is, in all honesty, pretty cringy, and you can see why this needs to happen.
I’ve decided to try and rewrite it to give it both better grammar, and a more compelling plot. This should allow me to both further improve my writing, and provide content for any people who, for some god unknown reason, liked this story.
that aside, if you did like the story, keep an ear to the proverbial ground for the rewrite. And thank you for taking the time to read this.