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  1. Summary

    critrate - main writing account. works hosted on this have been edited.
    nucifraga - secondary writing account for lower-effort (i.e. written in one sitting & unedited) fics
    calliphox - account used for archiving abandoned ideas.
    Using different accounts, instead of different pseuds, because it allows me to adjust email settings & other Preferences.

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    The union of three of my favourite PL:A character-related tropes:
    - Ingo is Zekrom (& Emmet is Reshiram)
    - Volo is Cynthia
    - Akari is the DPPt protagonist
    ft. very long time loop

    It is my belief that each story can be read standalone, though reading other stories in the series will definitely strengthen your overall understanding. The planned exception will be the fifth, and likely final, work in this series.

    The full timeline, including reference years & where each work in this series falls on the timeline, can be found in the End Notes of to play a role. The works in this series are more or less in chronological/intended reading order, though.

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    1. That Green Fellow? I think he's Barbatos.
    Aether POV. Aether's missing something about how Mondstadt treat the topic of Barbatos... He just can't pinpoint what it is.
    Fix-It for Signora's attack. First work in the series.

    2. For the Lack of a Gnosis
    Zhongli POV. A visit paid to Mondstadt in the aftermath of Osial's defeat turns out decidedly unproductive.
    Attempt at humour, looks into timeline changes.
    2.1. Alternative - Act 2, Scene 1
    Zhongli POV. Initial draft of the starting scene for ^ that can stand alone pretty well.

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  1. Rec 27

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    “Thanatos actually went after you.” Hazel’s eyes were wide.

    “I guess.” Percy could have gone his whole life without knowing that when Death blushed, he blushed gold. “I would have survived the fall anyway, to be honest. I’ve fallen twice that far from the St. Louis Arch.”

    “You did what?” Hazel asked.

    “It’s not relevant – I was twelve. What’s going on with those two?” He jerked his head towards the other conversation.

    Frank looked over. “You know what,” he admitted, “I think our fourth quest member only joined to rescue his boyfriend.”

    Zagreus infiltrates first Camp Jupiter, and then the quest to Alaska to free Thanatos. Persephone Proserpina enables him.

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    11 Aug 2026

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    maybe it's the speed at which I wrote this but I keep rereading it (while making little SPAG corrections) and being sooooo pleased with myself, genuinely tailor-wrote to my own sense of humour and favourite tropes, plus I'm really happy with the way I flitted from character to character and scene to scene, and how I rounded off each chapter.

    perhaps more could have been done on the truly POV outsider/pre-reveal side, but fr there's at least 4K words of that. If I really REALLY want more, more than I want to get on with my other fics and catching up on my studying missed during my burn-out-prevention-break, it might be time to reread the rest of HoO to find out where tf Nico went and write that.

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    “You sound like a mortal.” She said, with the faint glimmer of amusement in her eyes. Zagreus chortled too, but then fell silent. Nyx gave him a knowing look. “What is it, my child?”

    “You said the curse is tied into my godhood, right? What if…” The words tasted unnatural in his mouth, a blasphemy before they could even take shape in the air. Zagreus coughed them out regardless. “What if I could shed my divinity? What if I became a mortal?”

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    Or, despite being a god, Zagreus keeps running out of time. A "Zagreus Becomes Mortal" AU.

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    05 Aug 2026

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    Holy shit this is good. I was on my night shift / med student humiliation ritual / med burnout recovery day & I wrote some fic then binged this entire fic in one sitting, more or less. I think I started at about 3:40PM??? And it took me until 8:40PM to finish reading, with a break for dinner, a break to socialise briefly, & then a break for sorting out some life admin. My god, this was an amazing read. Subscribed & so hyped for the next chapter however long it may take. As soon as this is done I'm going to dl to kindle and read it all over again. Goodness gracious, I'm genuinely flabbergasted at the amount of research and mythology infusions that this fic has, not to mention the Hades lore and characters being combined with all of that. This has taken the author 6 years to get here and they're still chugging along, so much respect, 100/10, oh my fucking god :')))

    Absolutely amazing. No regrets.

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    When Hermes is mysteriously missing from one of Zagreus’ escape attempts, the prince assumes that some new task from the gods must have him all tied up.

    Of course, Charon knows exactly what’s keeping the little messenger god occupied.

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    31 Jul 2026

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    At twelve years old, the Hero of Legend nearly dies inside the palace of the Four Sword. Worlds away, the Hero of Lorule is saved by the ghost of a shadow. Opposites and equals in every way, the two boys are haunted by the Hero of Light’s legacy.

    Life goes on, through love and war and the machinations of gods.

    Shadow never expected to wake up again after shattering the Dark Mirror. Without the Hero he was created to follow, what’s the point of him? It’s a brave new world, and Shadow has no choice but to change with it, blissfully unaware of the Four Sword resting just below his feet.

    How do you react when faced with a past you long thought buried?

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    24 Aug 2025

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    Up til 5 can be a full story;
    Skimmed Warriors section of 9 and 11
    Up til 11 can also be its own story
    Up to 20 is also its own novel, pending sequel.
    This is a many layered story. Impeccable.

    Anddd 23 too :) very sweet. I keep expecting it to end but it keeps going. Love this one!

    // 5 Nov 25, read to completion but I don't understand the last 10 chapters because it's been too long since I read it in the first time. Needs a reread when I'm in the mood for Zelda again

    // downloaded to kindle 17 nov 25

    // 21 Nov 25 finished a start-to-finish read! Lovely story, reads like a true Zelda story, although my passion for the fandom having faded made it less enjoyable on reread, it was still a lovely thought-out and well-written story. Story focus definitely shifts from L/R to F/S over the course of the story, but it's honestly so cool to see the imagining of the Four(>Time)> Legend>Hyrule>Rift(>Wild) timeline in the context of the events of the story, overarching antagonist, and also Linked Universe. Very nice!!

    Addendum: oh my god I did not realise it was 170k words in total. No wonder it took me so long to read.

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    Tao Xuan struggled with envy over what he could have achieved in Ye Xiu’s place; had Su Muqiu lived, the target would have been completely different.

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    25 Dec 2024

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    17-05-2026; jesus christ, this author seriously just wrote half the fics i've ever read in TKA's english fandom. wow. props to them.